Friday, 6 September 2013



Ahh! screams and shouts could be heard from inside the dare crusher the most scariest ride of all. It was scarier because it was halloween. The volunteers and staff members were dressed brilliantly they really did look like horrid monsters.

As we were traveling through the mountain of doom it stopped. Everyone thought it was part of ride but soon all became FEARFUL. I could feel the hairs on my back stand up but, then suddenly fall louse. Jordan was getting restless and everyone was getting hungry.

TJ searched for a emergency exit, but had no more energy in him. Jordan wheres your phone said Jayden good idea. Oh left it in the bag. now  what?

crackle, crackle, crackle,crackle it sounded like the ride was going to start again everyone jump on I screamed. As we had our tummys turning we managed to get out. Alive.


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